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TIAT, San Francisco
November 15, 2024
training8 poems (training data)3 total votes
Themes
Diegetic→
The narrative unfolds in a
narrow lane, each stone feels
the steps of habitual feet. Rain
notices the umbrella symbols,
every puddle reflects incomplete
déjà-vu. Next door, behind the
café window, shadows speak
softly in the steam. A baker
hums a forgotten chanson, bread
rhymes come out caramelized. I
choose your back among fluent
strays, to say nothing until
we've crossed to the other
anecdote. We look back, missing
the exact moment where speech
detaches from what it names.
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We agree: Moving forward
we'll only say "I love you"
when we know what we mean
the word a sound stretched
like a hand cracking the echo
chamber of estranger
dictionaries open – Here, see
this is skin, warm like a
promise, hungrier than the
future
1 vote
Particles→
The last time you worked
with gravity you left
a sound and spilled
your body all:
↳ over
↳ in all
↳ or nothing
→ nothing but you and a lump
boring through a handful
of decades and amnesia and
joyful rot and I miss you
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Particles ligaments of absence I
arrive, there, absence 1.12 AM
particles dance but do not touch
at exactly the same time I
desire and I don't exist just
this_Hertz vibration of blood
particles & particles collision
electric spark without charge
this car's tuba bellen
aerodynamics later somewhere in
a fizz of urban particles this
ghostly fish egg of your absence
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Romance→
at dawn the street forgets us
gravel sings about footsteps we
kept for ourselves your absence
a returned light that causes the
dust to dance drops the clock's
hand I watch the seconds sail
through your absence each moment
is stamps I collect with no one
to exchange them against words
which drift towards the horizon
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This was in Barcelona / Nossara
/ Carcassonne / in a church /
underwater / in broad daylight /
on a couch / against a wall /
drenched in god's sweat / eyes
rolling / white ghost suns / 3d
printing skin / red mother /
white knuckles / tied free /
falling yes / no need to / walk
today
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Sun→
Each ray unfurls wasteful ties
on the pavements. A global
fabric shivers, survival scoffs
delays. Grey clock face marked
afternoon. The empty cafe
refuses speeches of inked
chairs. Light dissolves instead
of concrete speeches. A shadow
trail animates the sidewalk. I
follow it without knowing where
it sets out again. Once the
light was simple as a syllable.
Today a comet crosses my breath.
Sun doesn't only fall with
sparks but prevaricates my
tongue. And when evening imposes
its dark the pupils still keep
warm light. That is where I find
you.
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It must have been the 3rd or 4th
question after we ordered
drinks. He asked why I wore
sunglasses on my head even in
the middle of winter. This was
our 4th or 5th date and the only
repeating motif besides the
blushing shared silence. I
brushed his knuckle, drew the
church my grandpa and I kneeled
in every summer day, how the sun
chameleoned through stained
glass, the old man's pressed
eyes twenty women chanting god
down into country soil with
their wails, and so yes my
plastic shades a smaller
cathedral my hair a softer
sacrament.
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